been a busy off season with home remodeling work. Just now starting to get ready for cleaning season.
Id appreciate if a few of you could look over both of my sites and let me know what you think.
-Am i missing anything?
-up to date with technology? -
-overall presence? -
-content?
Im not proficient in this area and pay someone to manage my sites. Want to keep them in check as well.
Thanks in advance.
www.Dirty-roof.com
www.Cedarroofcleaningli.com
BlueRidge said
Feb 6, 2017
Erik,
The fist thing I notice is I am not crazy about fonts that aren't crisp and clean. Dirty Roof is ok but the phone number should always be really easy. I've never been a fan of the "dot" in place of the "dash". the numbers tend to run together and the older people get the more it happens.
I really like both sites. The only thing I would remove is the ARMA bulletin. We have been having some discussion about ARMA lately. I lost a big roof due to using their bulletin last year so it was removed. Just my two cents.
DirtyRoofcom said
Feb 6, 2017
Brett, thanks for taking the time. I'm looking in to your suggestions.
Bryan P said
Feb 6, 2017
Hey Erik,
I like both sites. Very informative and I like especially that you've got your contact form up front so people don't have to dig for it. I like the colors and that both sites scale to different sized screens. Good job.
One thing you might consider is hiring a proofreader or getting someone who can pick through the site for spelling/grammar/etc. Just with a quick scan I saw lots of run-on sentences, spelling errors, punctuation, etc. I'm maybe more sensitive to that because I've got a college English degree, but I just always want the stuff I write to be the best it can be. Pay someone to edit it once and it's done.
Great job overall! I'm impressed with your Cedar work. You do great work!
Bryan
DirtyRoofcom said
Feb 6, 2017
Bryan, appreciate your words. I have access to the sites. I can do some proofreading for these small errors and save some funds for something else. Thankyou
Patrick G said
Feb 6, 2017
I like both, but you have the cedar roof as the first photo on both sites. I would make sure Dirty roofs main one is asphalt...then cedar shots. Just what i notice a HO may not notice.
DirtyRoofcom said
Feb 6, 2017
Good point Pat. I thought the image changed every couple seconds but even if your right. Thanks
Eric Schnaible said
Feb 6, 2017
I second Eric and Patrick's thoughts. I do think you one off very professional though.
been a busy off season with home remodeling work. Just now starting to get ready for cleaning season.
Id appreciate if a few of you could look over both of my sites and let me know what you think.
-Am i missing anything?
-up to date with technology? -
-overall presence? -
-content?
Im not proficient in this area and pay someone to manage my sites. Want to keep them in check as well.
Thanks in advance.
www.Dirty-roof.com
www.Cedarroofcleaningli.com
Erik,
The fist thing I notice is I am not crazy about fonts that aren't crisp and clean. Dirty Roof is ok but the phone number should always be really easy. I've never been a fan of the "dot" in place of the "dash". the numbers tend to run together and the older people get the more it happens.
I really like both sites. The only thing I would remove is the ARMA bulletin. We have been having some discussion about ARMA lately. I lost a big roof due to using their bulletin last year so it was removed. Just my two cents.
Brett, thanks for taking the time. I'm looking in to your suggestions.
Hey Erik,
I like both sites. Very informative and I like especially that you've got your contact form up front so people don't have to dig for it. I like the colors and that both sites scale to different sized screens. Good job.
One thing you might consider is hiring a proofreader or getting someone who can pick through the site for spelling/grammar/etc. Just with a quick scan I saw lots of run-on sentences, spelling errors, punctuation, etc. I'm maybe more sensitive to that because I've got a college English degree, but I just always want the stuff I write to be the best it can be. Pay someone to edit it once and it's done.
Great job overall! I'm impressed with your Cedar work. You do great work!
Bryan
Good to hear, thanks Eric!