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SprayWash · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Honest Opinions on this flier

Zach Maynard · Approved Exterior Cleaner

It is super creative, I would just be afraid of some people not even reading it in the case that they may see the picture and automatically assume it is for maid services of some kind.

SprayWash · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Honestly Zach, if enough commercial customers expressed interest in it, I would consider doing janitorial work! I'm almost glad it gives that inference.

Zach Maynard · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Then you just might have a home run. :)

Brian C Jackson · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Ray I like it

waxman18324 · Founding Member Rest in Peace

Ray,

Like my brothers before me I like it. It's also extremely creative. My only concern is a property/facilities manager might see the bottle and quickly associate it with a household cleaner without reading the finer print. Perhaps minimizing the bottle a bit and increasing the font size would eliminate the aforementioned possibility. If your opening statement and logo were centered it might help distinguish you from a broadcast ad from a household cleaner.

Now having said this I don't see myself wih anything that nice.

Hank

-- Edited by waxman18324 on Thursday 16th of January 2014 01:04:16 PM

Barry Landis · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Very creative Ray. I like it.

Patrick G · Approved Exterior Cleaner

I have to agree with Hank, as soon as I saw the bottle I thought it was about a new cleaner for my house and as a guy i would have not read any further. Now maybe if it was that and a photo of your truck or somthing?

gutterdog · Approved Exterior Cleaner

The only problem with it is that spray wash stuff bottom right. It should read GutterDogs.

Eric Schnaible · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Its creative. my first thought was that it may not be the best approach for commercial clients.
The "free time" would probably not get the attention of an rme or facilities manager.

Ed Thompson · Approved Exterior Cleaner

I like the "Free Time" theme. I know where Ray is going with this. This is the type of message he needs to get to his clients. This flyer wouldn't work for most of us. This flyer is just one of many tricks Ray has in pushing his no hassle commercial soft-wash service. Ray is just playing with you guys. He's a pro at this.

Brian C Jackson · Approved Exterior Cleaner

Wow I thought ray wanted our honest opinion. Ed Glad that you didn't fall for rays mind control.